In Class Writing 9/17

Introduction:

“I know that you can hear me, all I need is like five minutes” These are the words of Joyner Lucas in his song, “I’m sorry,” published on August 12, 2016. The topic covered in the music video is mental illness, and how much of a serious issue it is. He supports his claims by first, showing both sides of the story, then showing fairly graphic images, then using expletive language, and finally using rhetorical strategies like pathos and a little ethos. Lucas purpose is to inform the viewer on how serious mental illness can affect people in order to persuade and educate the viewer that we as a society should be more kind. He adopts a depressing tone for his audience in order to convey his point. Joyner Lucas effectively uses his little ethos, and in creditable amount of pathos to convey his point to the audience on how serious mental illness is.

Published by Brett Guillaume

Brett Guillaume is attending his first year at Pima Community where he is interested in engineering. Although he has yet to declare a major, he's considering industrial or mechanical engineering. In high school, Brett took one year of automotive class and determined that he wants to focus on the design portion of cars, which lead him to taking engineering class for two years. From taking engineering classes in high school, Brett determined that he wanted to study engineering in college. In the future, Brett hopes to become an successful engineer. Brett spends his spare time hanging out with friend and mountain biking.

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