“I know that you can hear me, all I need is like five minutes,” I gave Lucas 5 minutes and it was honestly very influential and informative. From the very start of the song, Lucas main purpose was to convince and persuade the audience that mental illness is a serious and chronic issue in today’s …
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Brett Guillaume Janel Spencer WRT 101S 19 September 2019 Rhetorical Analysis of Joyner Lucas’ song “I’m Sorry” “I know that you can hear me, all I need is like five minutes” These are the words of Joyner Lucas in his song, “I’m Sorry,” published on August 12, 2016. The topic covered in the music video …
In Class Writing 9/25
Thesis: Joyner Lucas effectively uses his little ethos, and unbelieveable amounts of people to convey his point to the auidence that mental illness is a serious issue. Topic sentence number 1: From the very start of the song, Lucas appeals to pathos by convincing the auidence that mental ilness is a real problem in this …
In Class Writing 9/24
My target audience is people all over the age spectrum, it doesn’t matter if you are 8, 20, or even 70. It doesn’t matter what sex you are, or even your race. I am looking for people with common since, and be willing to change their argument, no matter how bias they are; I need …
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Brett Guillaume Janel Spencer WRT 101S 19 September 2019 Rhetorical Analysis Paper “I know that you can hear me, all I need is like five minutes” These are the words of Joyner Lucas in his song, “I’m Sorry,” published on August 12, 2016. The topic covered in the music video is mental illness, and how …
Essay 1 Outline
1) INTRO + HOOK + THESIS 2) 1st paragraph: The ethos Joyner lucas has, talk about his album and who he is as a person 3) Summary of the video 4) 2nd paragraph: The first part of the song how he uses pathos 5) 3rd paragrapg: The second part of the song how he uses …
In Class Writing 9/17
Introduction: “I know that you can hear me, all I need is like five minutes” These are the words of Joyner Lucas in his song, “I’m sorry,” published on August 12, 2016. The topic covered in the music video is mental illness, and how much of a serious issue it is. He supports his claims …
In Class Writing 9/11
Support for Claims: Are all claims supported by evidence, or are they sometimes supported by more claims? The New York Post (as linked from Dredge Report): The claims made in the article are supported by testimonial witness, and claims made by the accuser in the rape allegations. Not all the claims are supported by evidence …
In Class Writing 9/10
My strengths as a writer: Paragraph format: In high school I was introduced to PIECE format. P stands for point, or why you are writing the paragraph. I stands for introduction, or in other words, introducing the author(s) work you are writing about. E stands for evidence, or the quote you are taking from the …
In Class Writing 9/5
Q: What type of content are your top three posts (or most recent) on your timeline? Is this pretty typical for your timeline? What kinds of social groups/communities are you a part of? Compare what you see with what your peers see. Are there more similarities or differences? A: The three newest posts on my …
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